http://erictai.learnerblogs.org Erics school blog Tue, 02 Dec 2008 03:44:39 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=wordpress-mu-1.2.5 http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/06/20/gwynne-shield/#comment-7 Lynne Crowe Sat, 21 Jun 2008 06:10:55 +0000 http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/06/20/gwynne-shield/#comment-7 Congratulations. What does being in the development team actually mean? BTW - When you use a fullstop the next word starts with a capital letter! Congratulations. What does being in the development team actually mean?
BTW - When you use a fullstop the next word starts with a capital letter!

]]> http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/06/12/celebration-writting-2/#comment-6 Lynne Crowe Thu, 12 Jun 2008 21:19:32 +0000 http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/06/12/celebration-writting-2/#comment-6 Well done - this is a well written story. Have you shared it your parents? Check the spelling of your title! Well done - this is a well written story. Have you shared it your parents?
Check the spelling of your title!

]]> http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/05/29/10-a-side-rugby/#comment-5 Lynne Crowe Sat, 31 May 2008 19:12:30 +0000 http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/05/29/10-a-side-rugby/#comment-5 An interesting read - I learnt something about 10 aside rugby! Not too many mistakes but you do need to check your spelling of Ngaruawahia! An interesting read - I learnt something about 10 aside rugby! Not too many mistakes but you do need to check your spelling of Ngaruawahia!

]]> http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/05/18/inter-intermediate-soccer/#comment-4 Lynne Sun, 18 May 2008 05:06:39 +0000 http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/05/18/inter-intermediate-soccer/#comment-4 Well done for finally getting something posted. It might be an idea to check the spelling of the names of places and schools you have mentioned - Galloway Park, Maeroa, Peachgrove! Well done for finally getting something posted.
It might be an idea to check the spelling of the names of places and schools you have mentioned - Galloway Park, Maeroa, Peachgrove!

]]> http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/26/my-visit-to-the-cadbury-factory/#comment-3 tai3 Sun, 02 Mar 2008 04:48:50 +0000 http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/26/my-visit-to-the-cadbury-factory/#comment-3 This is an interesting post but it is spoilt by your lack of proofreading. It's a good idea to 'save and continue editing' your post after you have written it, rather than publish it. You can then preview it and will hopefully see all your errors. You have missing capitals for proper nouns and sentences!! This is an interesting post but it is spoilt by your lack of proofreading. It’s a good idea to ’save and continue editing’ your post after you have written it, rather than publish it. You can then preview it and will hopefully see all your errors. You have missing capitals for proper nouns and sentences!!

]]> http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/awsome-start-to-2008/#comment-2 Mrs Crowe Thu, 21 Feb 2008 03:00:39 +0000 http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/20/awsome-start-to-2008/#comment-2 I'm pleased that you are enjoying being in a new class. One of the challenges you need to do is carefully check this blog post for errors - seek perfection! I’m pleased that you are enjoying being in a new class. One of the challenges you need to do is carefully check this blog post for errors - seek perfection!

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