http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/26/my-visit-to-the-cadbury-factory/ Erics school blog Fri, 09 Jan 2009 23:11:48 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=wordpress-mu-1.2.5 http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/26/my-visit-to-the-cadbury-factory/#comment-3 tai3 Sun, 02 Mar 2008 04:48:50 +0000 http://erictai.learnerblogs.org/2008/02/26/my-visit-to-the-cadbury-factory/#comment-3 This is an interesting post but it is spoilt by your lack of proofreading. It's a good idea to 'save and continue editing' your post after you have written it, rather than publish it. You can then preview it and will hopefully see all your errors. You have missing capitals for proper nouns and sentences!! This is an interesting post but it is spoilt by your lack of proofreading. It’s a good idea to ’save and continue editing’ your post after you have written it, rather than publish it. You can then preview it and will hopefully see all your errors. You have missing capitals for proper nouns and sentences!!

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